mindless model
mimicking beauty
moribund miss world
made speechless
motionless mime
misleading mirror
May I take your hand and dance?
If I’m correct, I’ve just penned my first pleiades. Which makes me on prompt for day 30 of #OctPoWriMo. The penultimate day.
I don’t know about the pleiades (I thought there was something about 6 syllables, though I may be mistaken, I don’t quite remember, I looked earlier today and so muxh has happened since!), but I really like your poem.
I think it is more important any how 😉
You can do the simple version or the extended (syllable) version. I don’t do syllables, but I figured I could work with the simple version.
🙂 Another day for me! And as I already have two poems set for tomorrow… it’ll wait a little while now 😉
Yes, you may. We can dance. Or we can just stay in place and sway and pretend it’s dancing. I don’t care if it isn’t dancing, just like how I don’t care if you are a misfit. We can listen to our own song and perform a magic trick, make everyone else disappear,
(I loved the poem, by the way.)
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This is lovely Angela.