Utrecht (copy, paste, insert your own)

Today the first thing I do is to present a fellow participant: Shuku with her poem Family tree. Not only because the poem has SO much to offer (which it does) but also because of its beautifully written introduction. When you visit the blog, make sure you also check out Market District, Japan, 1945 (bomb-warning) and Call The Plumber, Paradise Is Stuck In The U-Bend (for a bit of lighter reading).

Enough brackets for now, here’s my poem for today. I’ve stuck to the prompt by not sticking to the suggested form. This is an elevenie about the place where I live:

Utrecht  (copy, paste, insert your own)

Rising majestically
Over mediaeval town
Visible from every direction

The prompt for day 12 was a to write a haibun, that takes in the natural landscape of the place you live. Poet Aimee Nezhukumatathil describes how this form ended her long search for a way to write about her travels. For me, the elevenie was an answer to that unasked question, when it got introduced to us during NaPoWriMo 2017 (thank you Gloria Gonsalves!) I wrote a number during my visit to Hamburg for example. I’ve just reread them, and they take me right back to some beautiful moments that I wouldn’t have captured otherwise.

More about how I stuck to the prompt by choosing a different form. As Aimee describes it, and important feature of the haibun is not simply to provide a shape in which to jot mundane musings of landscape and travel but also to a evoke a sense of aware —the quality of certain objects to evoke longing, sadness, or immediate sympathy.

I guess everyone who lives in an place with a distinctive tower, recognises the feeling I describe here. Seeing the tower means coming home. Hence copy, paste, insert your own… 

Domtoren Utrecht Pixabay

4 thoughts on “Utrecht (copy, paste, insert your own)

  1. Shuku

    Oh goodness! Thank you so so much for the links! I have never been to Utrecht, but I can see the tower rising over the town from your writing. I love the ‘Homecoming’ at the very end – so short and says so much!

  2. Dawn D

    Thank you for giving me an idea of how to write today’s poem. A haibun seemed too complicated, I didn’t know how to start it.
    I guess I’ll stick to something I know. Elevenie or limerick it will be!

  3. Gloria D. Gonsalves

    You’re welcome. I have been to Utrecht and your elevenie is a succinct picture.

  4. Pingback: NaPoWriMo / GloPoWriMo 2018 – Day 12 – “Renewal” by David Ellis | toofulltowrite (I've started so I'll finish)

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