3 thoughts on “Please edit me

  1. graemesandford

    I falter, I fumble
    I alter, I stumble
    In Winter, I crumble
    In behaviour, I bumble
    In hunger, I rumble
    In spin cycle, I tumble
    Inconfidence, I mumble
    In victory, I humble
    In sale mode, I jumble
    In spite of all this
    I’m still penumbral

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  2. Angela van Son Post author

    You are priceless dear Grae 🙂

    I was just proudly thinking “I rhymed”. I’ll keep doing just that (proudly thinking) but I bow to my master. Deeply 🙂

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